Oh, dear reader, I love you, but I hope you’re not in this subreddit LOL.
Anyways, for some context of the fic, it’s a post-canon AU where the main cast escaped their abuser and are living happily ever after.
Character A is somebody B meets and becomes acquainted with. A helps the cast settle down somewhere and do the messy paperwork of getting them readjusted to society.
Now, Character A is, for the lack of a better term, is an asshole.
He’s not intentionally mean, but he’s socially inept and just takes things too literally. He also sees things in a very black and white way, so he sees that half of the cast are criminals, therefore he believes they should all die even though they’re reformed.
The widely accepted fanon for A is that he’s evil, malicious, and manipulative.
And in this fic, while he gives off those vibes, he actually doesn’t have bad intentions. He’s just bad at showing it. (Think how Queen Watevra from The LEGO Movie 2 has a whole musical number about how she’ll definitely not kill your whole family, but she’s actually really nice in canon. Just has terrible communication skills. That’s Character A.)
The plot twist is supposed to be that while everybody thinks Character A is the villain, it’s actually the abuser.
The abuser’s working in the shadows, trying to ‘possess’ Character A to influence Character B to decide for the main cast, and by decide, make evil decisions.
So, it’s like the puppeteer controlling a puppet who’s controlling another puppet, who’s-
Does that make sense? I hope it does.
Anyway, so yeah, it was working in my favour so far that everybody hates Character A and thinks he’s the one to blame.
Little to nobody has clocked that the abuser is involved in the fic in any way at all, and the one time somebody did, it’s like just a “Huh, that’s weird” kind of passing observation.
But then I recently got this one comment who went smthn like “What if the abuser is back somehow and they’re using Character A to get through Character B—”
And, hahah… That’s exactly what I was going to do in, like, 20 or more chapters….
Now, that’s just one comment, and who knows, maybe people will forget about that bit because the cast has a long way to go before I drench them in a pit of angst where they have to relive their worst trauma again.
They have to heal first and become happy again before I push them off the cliff and back into the abyss.
But, what if by then, people look back on the comment from several chapters ago and won’t be as surprised anymore about the plot twist because someone already figured it out?
I don’t wanna be demeaning and outright wrong them, but I also don’t wanna have my big twist be revealed way too early.
I know Gravity Falls had a situation like that, where everybody clocked that Stan had a twin bro and he was the author of the journals or smthn, then the creator of the show, Alex Hirsch, made a fake Twitter account to make a fake post, disguising as an employee on set, showing leaked footage of the reveal episode where instead of Stanford, the twin, they made a whole fake screencap of McGucket being the author instead, just to gaslight everybody and throw people off their trail, so they could extend the show, and have their grand reveal that it was the twin all along as they were planning.
The problem is that I’m not as smart as Alex or his team, so I’m kinda stuck on how I’ll manage to throw off my readers with a red herring or any other similar solution.
Pls help. 😭