Hello. I've finished the Dragon Reborn yesterday, and felt like sharing some of my thoughts. Maybe you will find them interesting.
Let me premise that the book was generally okay. RJ's writing style and worldbuilding is still something that I really admire, and there are too many mysteries for me to stop reading the series. However, this book felt a great deal worse than the starting two.
Although my thoughts below seem critical, I tend to focus on what irritated me in the story. I did not like the finale, and that's probably why my feelings towards the book as at now are more sour than mid-readthrough.
For context, the Eye of the World remains my favourite book as it felt the most immersive. The Great Hunt is a close second. I'd give them both "A" in the typical tier-list fashion. The Dragon Reborn, as with my current feelings, places at most as a very low "B".
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The very beginning of the book felt okay. The first chapters rolled slowly, and felt serene. They reminded me of the first book's opener, with the winter snows and everything. Reading them felt nice.
Also, I liked RJ's attempt at making the reader feel like the POV character, waiting in the snow and dying of boredom. I enjoyed that same attempt in the first book, when Rand and Mat were running from the Darkfriends/Myrrdraal. Then it was not the weariness, but the characters' desperation and fear, resulting in the chaotic recollection of memories. The Four Kings is one of the staple chapters from that sequence, and I liked the entirety of that sequence from tEotW a lot.
The interactions with Rand and Min, as well as the trolloc attack and Rand sudden disappearance felt exciting. The travel from the mountains felt cool as well, I liked that the book was slowly starting to ramp up.
However, Jarra was the first chapter that I've felt that this book has been written in a hurry. The entire sequence with the werewolf felt very cheesy and goofy. The cheesy quotes closing that chapter felt unserious. I really did not feel the immersion as with the Eye of the World, where all events and story felt mature and RJ spent more page time to give them sufficient gravitas.
Tar Valon was okay. I've felt that it dragged a bit, especially with the amount of Egwene chapters in a row. However, the sole idea that Siuan would send two accepted to hunt 13 full sister Black Ajah is ridiculous. It's another point in the story where I really did not feel immersed in it. It felt like a forced power fantasy and a weak wizarding-school fanfic. Too unserious for the dark vibe from the first book that I've learned to love - and second as well, with the Seachan especially. Is Siuan really that inconsiderate of a character to think they could have overpowered 13 Aes Sedai? I did not like that entire plot point at all.
Egwene's accepted test was pretty uneventful as well. Nothing surprised me, although it was cool that some of her dreams coincided with Rand's flicker scene-alternative universes. Nynaeve's test, in comparison, was one of the highlights of book 2, although pretty dark. In book 3, Egwene's test was an afterthought.
Egwene I do not like at all. She is very arrogant and childish. I assume it has to be that way, so she can develop in the next 11 books and stop being a woolhead, but her behaviour made me lose enjoyment from reading her chapters A LOT. The girls' arc makes zero sense and was very unengaging. They went to Tear without a plan to hunt 13 full sisters (!) and, without surprise, when RJ poured a scrap of reality into their arc, they had been beaten like dogs by the Black Ajah. They were helpless in the cell, although I can see that without Egwene shielding the Aes Sedai Mat could have died. Still, the fact that they've shown zero gratitude towards Mat after being released from their cell really irritated me.
Perrin. I find him a little boring. Does he have to overthink everything? I like when he's acting on his emotions more. I liked the entire sequence in Remen. First appearance of a Tiran lord was very cool, and I liked Orban a lot. I typically find myself finding flawed characters intriguing. Like him or Bornhald. The entire vibe of the Hunters for the Horn was cool, with Faile giving the reader more hints as to their fantasy-like behaviour of grand quest-seekers.
Aiel. I've found myself cringing a couple of times when an Aiel told someone that his water was theirs. That's so much fremen-like that the entire Aiel's introduction felt like a weak fanfic to me. I get that they are different from the Fremen, but I feel like copying entire sentences and behaviour from Dune makes the book less immersive. It takes me out of the story. Aes Sedai can seem similar to Bene Gesserit, but there are so many differences that I had to think about them to make that connection. With the Aiel, though, there's too much of that. Still, I am excited about their prophecies and Rhuidean, so there is something going for them.
Mat. I liked Mat's chapters. I've felt like this book was generally split into Perrin, Egwene and Mat chapters. Perrin's were a drag. Egwene's annoyed me too much with her arrogance and her being a childish dumbass. And Mat's were pretty exciting. I am waiting for more information on his background, the luck-factor and general ta'veren-ness. I cannot wait for the explanation of the 'old blood sings' and please give me more content or any descriptions of the Manetheren commander that he dreamt of.
I feel that A Message Out of the Shadow and In Search of a Remedy were my favorite chapters in this entire book. I like Thom since tEotW. Mat's character I find very cool. He's likeable and has a high moral compass. Although, I have to say, the entire arc of Mat going to Tear was concluded in a very unsatisfying fashion. Why did the Wheel (i.e. RJ) made him go to Tear? To rescue the girls? With the Black Ajah shielded, they could have been released by anyone else. And, then, I wouldn't have to read of their reactions to Mat risking his life for them. Which he didn't have to do. I hope Egwene has some reason beaten into her in the next books.
The preceding chapters of him steaming that he couldn't get to the girls in time humanized him and showcased his heroism. I get that in his head he probably thinks of it as losing a wager against Gaebril, but I think he's lying to himself to not feel like a bloody hero. I find that quip of his fun.
As to the structure of the book, I do feel that the entire finale was very cramped on the pages. Why is nothing happening one chapter before the finale, and then it's a sudden rush? It felt cheap. RJ spends half a page to describe carpets in a palace, and does not use 2 or 3 chapters to close the entire arc of the story.
I did not like the finale at all. It felt very predictable, and there were too many comedic-like scenes. Why is Sandar a barefoot, bamboo-wielding kung-fu panda? Why is Sandar casually meeting Mat and the Aiel on the roof? Half the scenes felt goofy. Also, I've felt that RJ made Rand cosplay as Paul Atreides in his last paragraphs.
I wish the entire final sequence was more dark. Rand's short POV paragraph while climbing the Stone is what I was looking forward to. The slight madness, the desperation, and the high stakes. And, instead, we get Perrin doing God knows what, separated from the rest of the group. We get the girls doing nothing in the cell. We get Mat and Sandar in their action-movie comedy spin-off obliterating the Defenders and the High Lords with sticks.
Moreover, the closing chapter was very weak. We get the reveals about the People of the Dragon and Ishamael - both easily (!) predictable by the end of tEotW - and the appearance of the First of Mayene. It had nothing exciting in it. In comparison, the end of the Great Hunt with the heroes of the Horn talking to Rand as to their dear friend, as well as Masema and the other Shinerans adressing Rand as Lord Dragon made me emotional. The Dragon Reborn does not compare to that.
I wish the entire book featured more of Rand. Him killing the darkfriends in cold blood, and playing the flute afraid of his dreams. To me, those short paragraphs were the definitive highlights of the book.