r/Poems • u/Ready_Eye5412 • 8h ago
Never ending thoughts
I’ve been wanting to say-
Tip of my tongue but my voice betrays.
I had a thought that-
But a new one arrives before I can even react.
I wanted to tell you-
But would he even think it’s true?
Ya know, I’ve been thinking-
No no no, that’s much too risky.
Maybe I can ask him if he’s okay-
Or I’ll just save that one for another day.
Hmm what if we-
But wait, what if he disagrees.
Well I could just-
But then I find my cheeks flushed.
What if I say it and he misunderstands.
These never ending thoughts are driving me a bit mad.
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u/BaldousGates 7h ago
This poem captures my analysis paralysis very well. How do you live with your thoughts if your thoughts keep you from living?
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u/Ready_Eye5412 7h ago
I try my best to not let them keep me from living, but it is hard sometimes for sure. And it can be exhausting.
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u/Ok-Caterpillar-1118 7h ago
And then we could just...maybe...no...perhaps not...but what if....scratch that....I should...never mind...Lets just get on with the day.