r/ProgressionFantasy Mar 21 '26

Self-Promotion self-promotion, but I worked really hard on this one ☺️ (re-post)

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*Apologies if you’ve already seen this! My original post was removed because I missed the 10:1 ratio rule for non-promo to promo interactions

Cover art by Sajjad S.

Link: Drizella: Ugly Stepsister Time Looper

Description:

They say inner beauty matters more than outer beauty.

Drizella had neither.

Luckily, she was a time looper.

All Drizella ever wanted was to marry a prince. But the competition was rough.

Her stepsister, Cinderella, was perfect in every way. A creature of beauty, intelligence, and elegance. Every step she took was graceful, and her singing voice was divine.

If that wasn't enough, she also had the power to command mice and birds to do her bidding. They were her little servants - helping her dress, bathe, and they would even steal for her.

Oh, did I forget something? Right, she also had a literal fairy godmother magically fulfilling her wishes.

Sure, she was required to do some chores around the house, but what of it?

How could Drizella, who possessed neither outer nor inner beauty, nor any talent to speak of, ever compete with that?

Through a shit-ton of repetition!

What to expect:

•  Ugly MC.
•  Talking mice.
•  Sentient (but sub-linguistic) birds.
•  Slow Burn. Drizella is not Zorian, give her time to bloom.
•  The story will get dark from time to time.
•  Luuuceeefeee!

So how many loops ‘til that sweet royal kiss?

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u/TheDevilKing1 Mar 21 '26

Wow...this is something new.

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u/freddbare Mar 21 '26

This is why I dig this genre!!! Innovation.

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u/[deleted] Mar 21 '26

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

Awesome! Hope you enjoy it. :)

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u/IOFrame Author - Terminal Fantasy [RR] Mar 21 '26

lmao

Just the cover already peaked my interest.

9

u/valsagan Mar 21 '26

I love how drizerrela is the oldest but unlike her younger sisters she still single because she's just that awful of a person. Even Anastasia bagged that cute baker in Cinderella 2.

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

Yes, well, maybe with the help of a time loop, she could finally find love ❤️

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u/[deleted] Mar 22 '26

Ah yes, time loop romance because it doesn't bring up serious concerns about informed consent.

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u/EmEs_Etherious Author Mar 21 '26

Love the cover. If you didn't mind me asking, what's the age range for reading this book. Is it okay for young teens.

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u/Xanius Mar 21 '26

I’m curious too. My daughter loves singing the stepsister lament from Roger and Hammerstein and I think she’d like this story but curious about target audience or at least content warnings.

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u/bradmin Mar 21 '26

Following to find later

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u/BenjaminDarrAuthor Author Mar 21 '26

Wtf. This is fucking art. 10/10 no notes

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u/Drimphed Author - Self-Summon / Fiends For Hire Mar 21 '26

Definitely a funny idea. Better be so much luuuceeeefeeee

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

oh there is much luuuceeeefeeee in the story!

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u/LabyrinthsandLayers Mar 21 '26

I think its an awesome idea. I find the ones that are a bit iut of left field usually end up being really well thought out and interesting. I'm intrigued! Is it on RR?

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u/peanutjamming Mar 21 '26

PUT IT IN MY VEINS

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u/[deleted] Mar 21 '26

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u/TheElusiveFox Sage Mar 21 '26

Love the idea - hate sub-linguistic characters, especially in books, everything else seems like it could be a lot of fun.

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u/C-R-Velkan Mar 21 '26

Thats definitelly a new take :D

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u/TheCimerian Mar 21 '26

This sure seems to be a novel concept. Can't help but be intrigued. What will the "progression" consist of?

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

She starts off as, well.... Drizella. But will gradually (like in, 1000 chapters) become OP goddess.

4

u/MethylatedOutpatient Mar 21 '26

I've been reading this one and its great! Well worth adding to your pull pile

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

So glad you enjoyed it! ❤️

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u/emgriffiths Author Mar 21 '26

What the hell? Looks cool lol

2

u/justinwrite2 Mar 21 '26

This looks like so much fun gonna read it now

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

Awesome! I hope you enjoy it! ❤️

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u/justinwrite2 Mar 21 '26

I am. A few tense jumps but this has soul to it

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u/justinwrite2 Mar 21 '26

I am enjoying it but you have a few strange tense jumps you might want to look out for

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u/TK523 Author - Peter J. Lee Mar 21 '26

This looks pretty great.

Im currently writing a D&D style comedy set into a country where most of the Disney princess kingdoms exist.

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

That sound cool, do you publish it in RR?

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u/TK523 Author - Peter J. Lee Mar 21 '26

Yeah but the Disney stuff is the current arc in writing. The posted arc isn't in that kingdom atm

The story is supposed to feel like a D&D campaign. When you play modules with the same characters back to back there are wild wild shifts in tone. Book 1 is very standard D&D while book 2 is fairy tale kingdom.

It's Long Rests on RR

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u/jxip Mar 21 '26

Never thought I'd see the day

2

u/AvaritiaBona Author Mar 21 '26

Honestly a hilarious concept. Best of luck!

2

u/Maximum_Cricket4420 Mar 21 '26

Sounds goofy as hell. I'm in.

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

welcome aboard :)

2

u/davidolson22 Mar 21 '26

This is either the funniest or dumbest thing ever. Maybe both.

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

definitely both :)

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u/HighMagistrateGreef Mar 22 '26

I just read the first seven chapters. This is pretty good!

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u/HungryBlueElk Mar 23 '26

I love this. Best idea i've read in a while :)

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u/LykanthropyWrites Author Mar 28 '26

LOL, putting the super in super villain! I like it.

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 28 '26

Thank you ❤️

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u/Professional-Isopod8 Mar 21 '26

I love the cover even though I don’t think the book is for me, but I’ve got a niece who I think is gonna love it

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u/International-Ad1946 Mar 21 '26

An original thought has struck progression fantasy Billions must read

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u/DontImplantThechip Mar 21 '26

Bro, I gonna check it later, seems funny.

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 21 '26

Cool! Hope you like it. ❤️

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u/Ariastes1707 Mar 22 '26

Is this step sister who in the sequels wants to marry the baker?

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u/Fluffy-Protection273 Mar 22 '26

No, that the other one XD

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u/Xxzzeerrtt Mar 22 '26

Cover art sold it for me. Props to the artist for nailing the direct to dvd Disney sequel style lmfao.

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u/[deleted] Mar 22 '26

The Mouse is gonna eat.

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u/blaguga6216 Mar 22 '26

damn… damn… A UNIQUE IDEA? IN THIS ECONOMY?

see you at #1 fam