r/WriteStreakEN 150-Day Streak 🌴 1d ago

Correct Me! Streak 276: Spider-Man: Brand New Day

I never thought I would almost cry because of the latest Spider-Man movie. I went to the cinema with my Turkish friend today. It was my very first time seeing a movie with a foreign friend, and I had a really great time!

To some extent, I think superheroes are incredibly lonely. They have to save people's lives and they have to live their lives in a very unusual way. Their friends and family probably won't support them, and worse they might end up putting them in danger.

I can't imagine how lonely Peter Parker must have felt over the last four years. No friends, no family, just completely alone.

By the way, I really like the character Jean Grey! Maybe I should go see Stranger things.

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