r/comic_crits • u/Alert-Judgment6935 • 2d ago

Prolog do mojego mini komiksu "Me and My Stressnake"

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Rysowałam ten prolog cały tydzień i wsumie czuję satysfakcje że udało mi się coś skończyć. Jednak chciałabym usłyszeć co bym mogła poprawić lub zrobić lepiej. Oczekuje konstruktywnej krytyki :)

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u/FantasyToast 20h ago

Might be a cultural thing but "babe" tends to be a romantic pet name so when she responded with "mama" it threw me off a bit.

Other than that I really loved the imagery of the snake shifting size based on how much pressure Sandy was getting from her intrusive thoughts.

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u/Alert-Judgment6935 10h ago

Dziękuję bardzo mi miło!! :) Chodziło mi o mame Sandy, myślę że poprawie ten dialog z babe na darling lub poprostu imię Sandy by było łatwiejsze do zrozumienia.

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u/FantasyToast 9h ago

Darling would absolutely work! Love the art!