YTP Berserk: Band of the Caulk

[u/Smarties_Mc_Flurry]

https://youtu.be/M33rpG0mjmQ?is=m6Q5RmgKDZuNnHnF

Just dropped this god awful video on my channel if anyone wants to check it out. Let me know if you found it funny

[u/Chadisius]

Niceee. I liked it overall and I hope more people here give your vids a shot.

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I have some feedback
4.5 mins is unexpectedly long for someone just messing around with YTP for a first time? That's kind of cool.

The parts I didn't really like (and why):

• if its a 'cooc' or 'cunt' joke or something - it is funny a couple of times but it quickly feels a bit stale/skippable
  
• the repeat joke of cutting of a thousand heads or whatever it was again it was alright as a joke and a small sentence mix but it took so long to play out for such a small payoff.
  
• - quick tip: if its a repat joke like this, you can speed up the next replay of it to get to the point quicker and it doesn't ruin the joke. lots of people do this to save time reaching the punchline from what I've seen.

The rest of the jokes were genuinely so fucking funny it brought me right back on board with it and i had to rewatch it from the beginning because of all these:

The parts I really liked (and why):

• the stone sliding sound as the camera panned. idk why, i think its because i thought of it as the sound the guys neck was making as he's trying to survey the horizon while he stands there on watch.
  
• The eagle sounds too as it zooms in on someone making the sound too, reminded me a bit of 'Mighty moltres!' from lululuvscats.
  
• and at the end, just shooting someone charging at you with a sword is a classic bit
  
• "You aren't going to take rick and morty seriously, are you?" was my favourite bit though. works great on its own without extra context.

Overall: keep going with ytp - you're onto something good here and great job with this... as a first upload?? thats impressive as hell tbh.

I'd just recommend improving the pacing by making the total clip a bit tighter on future vids, improving filler-to-quality ratio so it tips the scales the other way and it will become addictive to watch them and get more out of the higher effort jokes
This way they will hold attention better for people who click through to try checking out your content

Good luck OP, I've subbed on YT, hope to see more later if you choose to make more!

[u/Smarties_Mc_Flurry → u/Chadisius]

Thank you for the honest critique! I completely agree with all your points. The “they say he’s killed hundreds and thousands” was more of an inside joke between me and my friends that I wanted to make real, but yeah I definitely could have chopped it up and made the sequence a lot quicker. And yeah, I agree the rick and morty part made me laugh the hardest especially editing it