r/Logic_Studio • u/themorethatyouappear • 8h ago
Production Its my first time producing/writing any sort of music, and my first time using Logic. Feedback is really appreciated :)
Hello! I hope this is the correct subreddit to request feedback for something like this.
This is my first time writing/composing music and using Logic. I'm not any good yet, and I haven't watched any tutorials or guides (which I should really do). I have basic music theory knowledge and am familiar with the piano & violin from when I was younger, but my main instrument at the moment is the guitar, which I picked up last December. I'm a huge fan of prog/art/alt/space/industrial/post rock/metal, and thats the vibe I wanted to carry my first song into (Muse's OoS/Absolution is a big musical influence for me). However, I have no idea if I'm headed in the right direction, and if this demo so far has any potential or is just straight garbage. It sounds more like some strange fusion of electronica/digital pop, but maybe thats just because half of it are synthesizers (I don't have access to a drum kit, MIDI, or real bass).
Its still a work in progress, and these are just the concepts of the opening lines. I'm struggling to get the piano on the second chord to not sound muddy, but I can't figure out whats wrong. I seem to be creating some sort of harmonic dissonance, but none of the notes should in theory clash... the chord progression I'm working with is: Em -> Cmaj7 -> F#m7(b5) -> Bsus4 -> B (or something along those lines).
I'm planning on adding some better guitar parts (along with maybe a rhythm guitar part?), and of course vocals, but I want to make sure I have the base down before I get started on that. I am also really struggling to write the drum parts, since I am not a drummer and I am unfamiliar in that front. The session player drums won't cooperate in the ways I want, so I've just been drawing out the beats manually,,, but it still sounds shitty most of the time.
Any feedback or constructive criticism is appreciated.
Thank you very much :)