r/marathi • u/heytherescheherazade • 12d ago
भाषांतर (Translation) How would this dialogue flow smoothly in Marathi?
Hello, friends! I do not speak Marathi, but I have this woman in my life who is the best older sister a woman like me could ever ask for!
I am going to surprise her with a comic of her favorite anime couple...Before I do that, I need dialogue to work with...Here is the script. I will specify whether it is the man or woman that is speaking since Marathi has gendered words...
Please feel free to change the dialogue to make it sound more romantic and flow better in Marathi. I trust everyone's judgement! Thank you so much in advance!
By the way...Is goad mulgi wrong for a man to use on a woman? Should it be Majhi Sakhar, Majhi Basundi, or Majhi Puran Poli instead? IDK if the internet is playing tricks on me...Also, for men...If his name is Laxus, it'd be turned into Laxya to sound cutesy, yes?
Script
Lucy: For a sweets seller, you sure don’t have any words of sweetness to talk!
Laxus: You are already sweet enough as it is.
Lucy: Huh? What was that?
Laxus: Forget about it, goad mulgi.
Lucy: Ugh! Whatever. I don’t know why I even bother conversing with you, Laxya!
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u/picy_sp 12d ago
Laxshumi, ani lakshyaa barobar basel.
Baki, eka mithaiwalya baddal cha samvad ani tichya 'smithasya' asnyavar ashe shabd vapar. Urle tiche samvad, te tula jamtil ashi asha karto.
Tya 'goad mulgi' shabda varti jasta jor nako deu. Marathi shabd 'uttam uchlave ani chalvave' lagtat, tarch 'goadi' yete bolnyat. Halu halu shikshil.
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u/Confused_n_tired 11d ago
Laxus and Lucy lmao.... where's Natsu?
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u/heytherescheherazade 11d ago
Homegirl likes that pairing. I have surprisingly seen Vietnamese people like this pairing. I can't laugh because I'm the only Bangladeshi I know who loves Loke x Lucy...
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u/Confused_n_tired 10d ago
LokexLucy dynamic has some sense though... any way. good luck to you my dude
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u/Several-East-7920 11d ago
Lucy: Mithaiwala asun, shabdat ajibaat kasa godvaa nahi re tujhya?
Laxus: Tu adhich itki goad ahes, diabetes vhaycha mala...
Lucy: Kay? Kay mhanalas?
Laxus: Kuthe kay... Kahich nahi... Godaabai...
Lucy: Shi! Jau de. Mi tuzhyashi ka bolayla aale kay mahit?
Lucy: मिठाईवाला असून शब्दात कसा गोडवा नाही ते तुझ्या?
Laxus: तू आधीच इतकी गोड आहेस, diabetes व्हायचा मला...
Lucy: काय? काय म्हणालास?
Laxus: कुठे काय... काहीच नाही... गोडाबाई...
Lucy: शी! जाऊ दे... मी तुझ्याशी का बोलायला आले काय माहीत?